An Invitation

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Re: An Invitation

Postby hollyshort_reconjock » Tue Jul 14, 2009 5:34 pm

Fun! More judges! So there's going to be a first place, second place, and third place? Yayz!
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Winter » Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:41 pm

Why not have First Place and Second Place, and then have a little commentary for each piece, ie, 'what I liked most about this submission was...' regardless as to whether or not they placed? Even if I don't place I'd love some feedback on what I wrote ^^ Or that might be too much depending how many entries you get, so you could just give each one a category like, like you said. I think that would work well too ^^
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Re: An Invitation

Postby hollyshort_reconjock » Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:44 am

I like that idea! Like XephiaWinter, I'd love to have some feedback on what I wrote.
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Griffar » Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:02 am

Mmm, I like the idea mainly because, it's not my best work, but I worked my ass off, but having some feedback would help. and I think I rushed the end to much, so I had a short complication, and short resolution. But my orientation went on for ever. I did mine as a short story. Is that alright???
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Kitsy » Wed Jul 15, 2009 11:02 am

I've only read half of yours so far Griffar, so idk yet xD

I do like the idea of first place, second place the commentary. In the commentary I think I'll put both why it's good, and then maybe how it could be improved? Or would that be too pretentious of me? xD
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Winter » Wed Jul 15, 2009 10:37 pm

I don't think it'd be pretentious of you at all ^^
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Re: An Invitation

Postby crystal_clear » Fri Jul 17, 2009 3:51 am

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No, I don't think it'd be pretentious. In fact, I think it'd be nice to see why I didn't make first or second place, if I didn't make first or second place. It's a lot better than reading the two names and then saying "Oh, I didn't make it." It gives someone something to look out for next time, y'know?
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Griffar » Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:22 am

Yeah, so say, when you announce the winners, tell us what they did right, which made them stand out. And if they did something wrong, that almost got them kicked off the podium or didn't do as well, then say that as well, so then in the future people can know what and what not to do.
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Cat Moon » Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:09 pm

Frond, this sounds like so much fun! Will we need our characters from the other challenges by Kitsy, Griffar? Because I'm new and I didn't get to do those ones.
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Kitsy » Thu Jul 23, 2009 5:58 pm

No, you'll be fine without them.
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Re: An Invitation

Postby Cat Moon » Thu Jul 23, 2009 6:08 pm

Good! I'm very excited now *jumps up and down like a three-year-old* And no, I'm not a three year old with an advanced mind-set pretending to be older.......Much.
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