so this is my first attempt at AF characters....

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so this is my first attempt at AF characters....

Postby Aine » Sun May 24, 2009 8:18 pm

and also my first anime attempt. its not great so pretty please tell me where to improve!!
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Re: so this is my first attempt at AF characters....

Postby Griffar » Mon May 25, 2009 10:36 pm

Not quite sure who it is, because it is a bit blurry. But at aa geusse i would say it is Artemis.
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Well, some constructive crit.

Because it is blurry, i can't really comment on the eyes, but i think you have got a good style of drawing hair. The chin comes to a harsh stop which gives it thee pointy loook. Keep the point, but make it a little less sharp.

Hope that helps. :D
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Re: so this is my first attempt at AF characters....

Postby Aine » Wed May 27, 2009 5:02 pm

Thanks! cool ive never liked the chin anyway but i couldnt tell what was wrong with it! so BIG THANKYS!! *rushes off to change chin*

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Re: so this is my first attempt at AF characters....

Postby Raineesun » Sun May 31, 2009 3:40 pm

It's good! really blurry, but you can tell it's really good! :) :)
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